Comments: One Moment in Time

Posted by: Aerm1

Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/05/02 05:36 PM

You're right. No A-plot, no B-plot, but oh, so WAFFY and sweet.

You have made a terrible mistake, you know. Now you have to write some more. wink

Ann
Posted by: Kestrel73

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/05/02 06:13 PM

Nice, very nicely done. Ann's right...you've got to write more. smile

Lote
Posted by: gerry

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/05/02 06:35 PM

You really have captured a moment in time that defines our two heroes.

Nice work. Hope the muse visits you more often.

gerry
Posted by: Laurach

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/05/02 08:31 PM

AW
Posted by: ChiefPam

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/05/02 09:05 PM

Nice. Good parallel structure, too. smile

Feel free to come up with more!

PJ
Posted by: merry

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/06/02 12:58 AM

Very nicely done - very waffy.
keep writing
merry
Posted by: EmilyH

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/06/02 05:10 AM

This was wonderful. I'd love to read more. smile
Posted by: Nan

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/06/02 05:12 AM

Very nice indeed. Now, how about another one?

Nan
Posted by: Triciaw

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/06/02 05:24 AM

A wonderful, waffy story! smile smile
I enjoyed it immensely.

I'm looking forward to your next story. wink

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Posted by: deans-superchic

Re: Comments: One Moment in Time - 01/09/02 06:26 AM

Thank you for all the wonderful comments.

As to me writing anything more.....I have a feeling it'll be at least another 13 years before anything even half way presentable, comes out of this brain again! biggrin

It took me ages and ages to get just that little bit out. I'm amazed at all the wonderful writers out there who are constantly coming up with these wonderful stories and really getting into the minds of the characters. This little outing has made me realize how difficult it is to get the words out of my brain and onto paper (or, in this case, the screen wink ).

Well, enough babbling! Thanks again for being so sweet! For now, I'll leave the writing to the "experts" and just stick to reading! goofy