Comments - A Closet Encounter, part 2/2

Constructive comments of all kinds welcome, as always.

Meredith

Nice!!!

I really like what you did with this, Meredith. It's a lot of fun, as well as being WAFFy and romantic. Clark reciting the Periodic Table of the Elements backwards was hilarious - and even better when Lois recognised what he was doing. And her own recognition that he was very attracted to her, and her determination to do something about it, was perfect.

Loved the description of Clark nibbling kisses all over Lois's neck and shoulder... <img src="graemlins/happy.gif" border="0" alt="[Happy]" />

All I missed was that conversation - plus lots more smoochies - they're planning to have later!


Wendy

Wow. Whoa you think that this is finished you silly girl... more!

Oh, that was so nice... sensual and funny and sweet ... at least, up until that final line. "The End"??? I don't *think* so <g>

PJ
who has no room to talk

Well, I'm in the minority, I guess ... I thought it was perfect just the way it was.

The ending was *so* very satisfying! Everything the first part promised and more!

Kathy (who can see right through Meredith's silly attempts in the first part's comments folder to make us think posting part two wasn't high on her priority list. You were chomping at the bit to post this and you know it!! <g> )

Happy WAFFY sigh!

Just perfect, Meredith!

Irene

Meredith,

That was lovely. Now where is part 3? If you think this is finished, you've got another think coming.

Ann

Oh for a minute I thought she would see him sans glasses and know he was Superman. But what a nice little predicament they were in. Laura

Meredith

WOW! This is wonderful. I love it.

I enjoyed this immensely. Thanks for sharing it.

Tricia <img src="cool.gif" border="0">

Very nice, Meredith. You have a real gift for humourous banter, and when it's combined with a bit of sexual attraction, the result is even better

'Unreasonably attractive partner', eh? Love it!

Yvonne
(who'd settle for a reasonably attractive partner )

Awwww!!! Very nice! Who'd of thunk that Lois could be both naughty and nice at the same time!

I just loved their prediciment!!! More! More! More!

Missy

<sigh> Just perfect! Thanks for the early Christmas present.

Aw, Meredith, this was just terrific! I loved the humor, the tension between them, the waffiness, Lois's thoughts about Clark--it was all so well-written.

Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

Tracey (sighing happily after such a great read)

Meredith,
like everyone else said, this was great!


Avia

Sorry - fumble-fingers!

Wow - thanks for all the bouquets, gentlefolc! If you keep being so nice about my stories, I may be forced to keep writing!

Yvonne said, Gosh - coming from the author of the warehouse scene in FoDIV, that's a real compliment! /me blushes furiously!

There seems to be another theme here... Uh, well... as some of you know, this story may still have plans for me, but if they come to anything, it'll be moving to the nfic board. I'm very sorry if that disappoints anyone...

Fortunately, not all my readers are so militant...
That's it, you tell 'em, Kathy!

And I'm profoundly relieved to see that Marilyn agrees (since she knows guys who know guys...)

Thanks again, Wendy, Marnie, Pam, Kathy, Irene, Ann, Laura, Tricia, Yvonne (if I had a spare partner I'd DCC him straight over, Y!), Missy, Marilyn, Tracey and Avia! I'm really glad you all enjoyed it.

Meredith

Coming late to this, Meredith, I'm sorry. But I still need to comment, because I've just spent a very enjoyable moment catching up on this wonderfully waffy and steamy story.

Man, is it hot in here or what? It was such a nice idea to lock Lois and Clark in a closet where they wouldn't have much space to do anything else but give in to their hormones...and their dawning feelings! I really loved the end, how Lois wanted to make sure Clark wouldn't say he wanted to be friends only. It was so sweet and promises so much for their future.

Of course I wouldn't be against a continuation of this...like in a quiet place where they could smooch happily without being disturbed. And talk, too. Of course, talk. How could I forget the talking?

Oh yes, I know how! This...

[img]http://images.fotki.com/photos/1/11220/20163/hpil07-vi.jpg?996340341[/img]

...could make me forget all talk.

Helene

Hi Meredith,

Nice very nice! I love your humour and your sensitivity. This filled all the promise that you shared with us in Crewe.

Yours Jenni

Meredith,
Sorry I'm late with this.
The others have said how I feel.
Wonderful waffy.
Like Pam said it was great until she read "The End".
More would be very nice.
merry

Hélène, there's no need to apologise - particularly if your comments are accompanied by piccies! /me wonders how to get Hélène to read more of her stories...

Thanks for the comments, Hélène, Jenni and merry, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Meredith