Comments- New Old Flame

Posted by: Aerm1

Comments- New Old Flame - 02/01/02 05:01 AM

Very interesting twist. And Lois actually learned to cook.

Ann
Posted by: nat

Re: Comments- New Old Flame - 02/01/02 07:18 AM

Heh, this was a really cute and sweet story. smile What I thought made it cuter was that Lois learned how to cook. ;-) I thought the story was sweet enough on its own, but it still has immense potential to be developed into a bigger story. smile I won't pressure you or anything - just letting you know. wink

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

nat
Posted by: Laurach

Re: Comments- New Old Flame - 02/01/02 09:14 PM

intersesting story. Nice ending. laura
Posted by: merry

Re: Comments- New Old Flame - 02/03/02 09:37 AM

stopquitdont,
You have a nice, sweet and very waffy story here.
You also have developed a nice new character in Tony.
I enjoyed the story. keep writing
merry