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#127589 - 04/12/01 11:20 PM The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
Cmdr. Ivanova Offline
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Registered: 04/11/01
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Hoo boy. <fans self> wink

I *loved* that part; it was WAFFy and steamy and very, very funny and light-hearted -- My only complaint is that it cut off too soon. <G>

I'll start off the clamoring for more. <G>


Peace,

Ivanova

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#127590 - 04/13/01 01:15 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
sheilah Offline
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Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 1767
Loc: Colorado
Oh, I loved it!! I LOLed at your "channeling Bruce Willis from a rejected Moonlighting script"! Talk about a great way to go in and fix all those moments in the show that didn't seem quite right. Can't wait to see what you do with the argh! I won't even bother to mention your terrific dialog, zoom. It's a given that you write L&C so I can hear Dean's and Teri's voices as they speak. Oh, BTW, is this the one you've been telling us is the non-nfic nfic wink?

I also loved the bit where Clark abandoned Toni and came over to cook dinner for Lois. And then when he told Lex that they didn't have any plans--just gonna fix dinner and go to bed early!!! LOL!! I was cheering, "Go, Clark!"

Hurry and post part 4!
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#127591 - 04/13/01 01:32 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
Thanatos Offline
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Registered: 04/10/01
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Well done zoom, I especially like the torturing of Lex biggrin. This story is great so keep it comeing wink.
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#127592 - 04/13/01 01:34 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
Jessi Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 97
Loc: Missouri
Wow, I love this. Absolutely love this. You've got me checking the boards first thing in hopes that the next part is out. More soon, I hope. smile

Jessi

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#127593 - 04/13/01 01:54 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
Nethra Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 100
Loc: Pennsylvania, USA
This is great!

Nethra

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#127594 - 04/13/01 02:20 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
merry Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 2448
Zoom,
I'm with the others.
I love this.
You can't post part 4 soon enough.
yesterday would be nice.
more soon please
merry

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#127595 - 04/13/01 02:20 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
Keshandra Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/10/01
Posts: 214
Loc: South Australia
It's all been said, so I'll just add...more! More! More! Oh yeah, great part Zoom, I loved it. Glad you've finally taken pity on us and started posting regularly. smile
Alex
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#127596 - 04/13/01 02:30 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
Kraz Offline
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Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 29
Loc: Ohio
Zoom -

Another brilliant 'episode'. It does my heart good to see Lex Luthor foiled at his attempts to 'charm' Lois Lane.

I always hated that about the series. The comic canon always had Lois at odds with Luthor from the start. She always could smell a rat, and Luthor was the biggest rat in Metropolis.

Hope to see part 4... soon!

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#127597 - 04/13/01 02:35 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
jrasparagus Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 32
Loc: Sugar Land, TX
Oh, this part was so great! Are you going to go through every moment that could have gone differently just like this? Because if you are, I certainly am not complaining! Everything has been written so well that you can just feel what the characters are feeling and experiencing. It's kind of fun going through and making every moment that I hated something Lois did or said turn out better! Thanks! smile

Amber smile

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#127598 - 04/13/01 02:38 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory, Part 3 -- Comments
tim Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/10/01
Posts: 63
Loc: Recife, Brazil
Very well done, Zoom. Lois seems to get control just in time! Its good that she gets to go back and see how her 'earlier self' behaved and I love it when Lex is thwarted smile

tim (hitting refresh waiting for part 4 smile

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