Oh, I loved it!! I LOLed at your "channeling Bruce Willis from a rejected Moonlighting script"! Talk about a great way to go in and fix all those moments in the show that didn't seem quite right. Can't wait to see what you do with the argh! I won't even bother to mention your terrific dialog, zoom. It's a given that you write L&C so I can hear Dean's and Teri's voices as they speak. Oh, BTW, is this the one you've been telling us is the non-nfic nfic
I also loved the bit where Clark abandoned Toni and came over to cook dinner for Lois. And then when he told Lex that they didn't have any plans--just gonna fix dinner and go to bed early!!! LOL!! I was cheering, "Go, Clark!"
Hurry and post part 4!