Thank you for finding some mistakes, Rogue Chip. I'm sure there are plenty of them.(You only have to read this message and you can find some.) I'm not doing it on purpose, I swear. The other day I found myself some, (and there were BIG.)
It's obvious that the story needs a beta-reading before publishing it. Now the story is finished, at least before the corrections and adding some tips, like yours. (It's interesting. I hadn't noticed it. But there are things that you can't see it, but others yes...)
Thanks for reading it,
"No net and no fic make Jose go crazy"
Adapted from "The Simpsons" Tree House of Horror V