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#134106 - 04/14/01 12:48 AM The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
Aerm1 Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 1496
Loc: KY, USA
Wow! Zoom, each part is better than the last. I'm hooked.

Ann

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#134107 - 04/14/01 01:12 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
sheilah Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 1767
Loc: Colorado
Ack! Zoom!!! How could you stop there?!! I wanna know what happens! Right now!!! Post part 5 now! Immediately!!

The ASU rewrite was so sweet--and it made such good sense, given the way Clark was feeling. I liked the way Lois brought his memory back...and I can't wait to find out what plan she makes up on the fly to deflect a desperately hurt Clark/Superman, as she stands there in her nightgown.
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#134108 - 04/14/01 01:13 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
In4Adventure Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/13/01
Posts: 1004
Loc: German island in the North Sea
Wow Zoom!
You have no idea how glad I am to be finally registered and able to post!
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What an excellent story!!! I am hooked and in for the long run. smile
It is absolutely wonderful to relive all the different LnC moments from the different stages of their relationship. I can't wait to read the next 11 parts. <IMG SRC="dance.gif" border="0">
I have to admit part 2 or was it 3 <g> had my head spinning. But your explanation was great. biggrin
More, please,
Natascha
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#134109 - 04/14/01 01:19 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
Nan Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 2703
Loc: The Lone Star State
I always felt so bad for Clark in that scene. I can't wait to find out how it changes. Hurry with the next part!

Nan
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#134110 - 04/14/01 01:25 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
ardchem Offline
Jimmy Olsen

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 5
Loc: LA
Zoom!!

How could you?????????

I'm pleasantly reading......

Enjoying the subtle rewrite of ASU and loving it.....

So engrossed in your amazing story that I don't notice I'm reaching the end of the section........

And then............

ACK!

When I reached the end, I felt as if I had just finished watching one of those old serials that were shown on Saturday afternoon at the movie theatres. The hero/heroine is in peril, (Oh, my). Will he make it out alive? Will she be rescued from the villain before disaster strikes?

Zoom, please, post the next part ASAP.

Lisa

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#134111 - 04/14/01 01:47 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
amac Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 3828
Loc: Boston
Catching up. Nice story.

~amac

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#134112 - 04/14/01 02:00 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
Jessi Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 97
Loc: Missouri
Ooh, now you get to fix the dreaded "I'd love you if you were an ordinary man" scene. I can't wait.

One question, though. If Lois told Clark that they were in love in ASU, why is this scene even happening now? Shouldn't their relationship have been sent way off in a different direction?

Not that I'm complaining, you understand. I really want to see this scene fixed. smile

Jessi

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#134113 - 04/14/01 02:02 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
deans-superchic Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 626
Loc: Tampa Bay, FL, USA
Wow! This is great Zoom! I'm just catching up on this and it's wonderful to revisit so many of my favorite scenes! I hope you post the next part really quickly! biggrin
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#134114 - 04/14/01 02:05 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
MissyG Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 655
Loc: Texas Hill Country, US
Oh Zoom! Great story!

I, too, love going back to the different phases in their relationship with Lois knowing the future.

Keep it coming!

Missy

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#134115 - 04/14/01 02:09 AM Re: The Persistence of Memory part 4: Comments
Kate Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 67
Loc: Maryland
Zoom,
Don't you have this story somewhere all in one piece!?! I want to read it all right now, tonight!

"Cat Grant with a diploma" ROTFLOL


Maybe a few more pics to illustrate? I do so love your pictoral essays....and I haven't seen an illustrated fic for quite awhile. Dali meets Sman was brilliant.
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