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#177476 - 04/10/02 05:11 PM Comments: Pocket Lint
Aerm1 Offline
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Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 1496
Loc: KY, USA
Okay, Wendy. You know how I feel about first person. ( I still feel that way.) But this definitely needed to be in first person, and it was a very nice scene.

Love the insults.

Ann

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#177477 - 04/10/02 05:21 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
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Registered: 04/13/01
Posts: 218
Loc: Nashville, Tennessee USA
Wendy,
That's quite an imaginative list of insults you have there! I think "He's an animated lump of gangrene." is my favorite!

I really like the way you changed gears to make the reader be eavesdropping on them in the last half. Very funny.

TerriAnn
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#177478 - 04/10/02 05:41 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Karen Offline
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Registered: 08/16/01
Posts: 324
Loc: Charlotte, NC
LOL, great story. Definately funny, and I like how you did the first person talking to the reader.
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#177479 - 04/10/02 05:50 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
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Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 137
Loc: Pennsylvania
LOL, Wendy, fabulous!!!

Always full of fanfic surprises!!!

Thanks for sharing smile
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#177480 - 04/10/02 05:51 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
MissyG Offline
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Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 655
Loc: Texas Hill Country, US
Whew!!!! Glad there wasn't any kryptonite in that knife!! Guess this little story proves that there is a fine line between love and hate... Glad Lois decided to finally fall on the "love" side of the lint, er... line!

You should wake up with ideas like this every morning!!

More soon!

Missy

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#177481 - 04/10/02 06:17 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
ShayneT Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 355
I enjoyed this, Wendy. It had a tone that was a departure from your usual style, but it was an entertaining departure. The tone and the style and the story all worked well together. The story revealed a nicely understated sense of humor that made everything work together.

This was fun. Keep up the good work.

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#177482 - 04/10/02 06:19 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Nan Offline
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Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 2653
Loc: The Lone Star State
Now that was funny. Since when did you start writing comedy? More, please.

Nan
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#177483 - 04/10/02 06:31 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Katie Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 299
Loc: UK
ROTFL Wendy! I adore this! biggrin

I thought you said you couldn't do comedy? It's great! You should definitely try and write more comedy fic, you're good at it! With lots more killer remarks like these wink

Now, this remark had me clamping my hand over my mouth so I wouldn't make too much noise!

Quote:
Clark Kent was spawned by a leak from a toxic waste dump.

On Krypton.


That is funny! I can just picture Lois's face while she's thinking that.

But, this has to be my favourite:

Quote:
Clark Kent is a walking waste of oxygen. He's an animated lump of gangrene.


That has to be one of the funniest things I've read in a fic for a while! I loved it! I wished she'd have said that to Clark though, because that would have just been hilarious!

I want more of this kind of stuff, Wendy! It's great, and so much fun! Definitely cheered up a miserable day!

Katie smile

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#177484 - 04/10/02 08:00 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Laurach Offline
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Registered: 04/10/01
Posts: 3874
Loc: NY
Yes wendy this was a departure from your usual. very humorous! I loved it. Laura
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#177485 - 04/10/02 09:48 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
shadowfax Offline
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Registered: 02/16/02
Posts: 620
Loc: Metropolis
Shaggy Druggie??????? ROTFL!!!!

It was a hilarious story, Wendy, that became very sweet and WAFFy at the end. smile

The insults were funny - I laughed harder and harder at each successive contumely!

It gave just the right dramatic touch to have Clark run off at the crucial moment and leave Lois believing that he was avoiding her because she didn't hear about any Superman rescues. <img src="graemlins/happy.gif" border="0" alt="[Happy]" />

I loved it when Lois started talking to us near the end - I guess she's right: we are voyeurs. <g>

And the last line was sweet and funny. <img src="graemlins/happy.gif" border="0" alt="[Happy]" />

Lovely story! More soon, please!

Shadowfax
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