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#177496 - 04/12/02 05:01 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
merry Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 2448
Very well done Wendy.
and very funny.
merry

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#177497 - 04/12/02 07:48 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
nerdgirl Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 126
Loc: Lancaster Co, PA, USA
Hi Wendy!

I don't think the story is stupid in the least! I loved it! Those insults of Lois' were hilarious! The end was also funny! Lois kissing "pocket lint"--who knew? wink This was a cute story, and a joy to read. Please write more! smile


Have a tucked-in-tight day!

nerdgirl smile

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#177498 - 04/12/02 11:58 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
traceylynn Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/15/01
Posts: 151
Loc: Baltimore, Maryland, USA
Hey Wendy! Just wanted to say that I thought this was really cute, and I had a great time reading it smile

Thanks for sharing!

Tracey smile

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#177499 - 04/14/02 12:42 AM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Kestrel73 Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 05/27/01
Posts: 1338
Loc: Singapore
LOL! Great insults, Wendy. And great story too.

Lote
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There are men who hate me;
Let me love them.
There are men I have wronged;
Let them forgive me.

- Saying of the Dinka Tribe

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#177500 - 04/22/02 01:52 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Wendymr Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 2147
Loc: Irish exile in the UK
I'm amazed and delighted that I need to come back and add further thanks for comments on this story. smile

Antonia, Marilyn, Jill, Adam, Merry, Nerdgirl, Tracey and Lote, thank you all very much indeed for your kind comments and compliments. I'm so glad that the humour worked for you. smile

Jill said:
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I'm not usually a big fan of 1st person either, but this worked extremely well. I could just picture Lois ranting and all of her reactions....not to mention the final scene. <eg>


Awww! Thank you! As for first person, have you never read Jane Eyre? Wonderful book! wink


Thanks again, guys. smile And if my Muse is ever so exercised again, I'll try not to debate so much before posting the result. goofy


Wendy smile

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#177501 - 04/22/02 01:58 PM Re: Comments: Pocket Lint
Bratling Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/01/02
Posts: 1561
Loc: SW Georgia, USA
Nice work Wendy! biggrin I was laughing hard enough that the entire computer lab was staring at me...more please?
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"And we shall exist by amusing ourselves, by dreaming of monstrous loves and fantastic universes, by complaining and quarreling with the pretenses of the world..."
--Arthur Rimbaud, The Flash of Lightning

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