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#177991 - 01/05/02 09:36 AM Comments: One Moment in Time
Aerm1 Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/11/01
Posts: 1495
Loc: KY, USA
You're right. No A-plot, no B-plot, but oh, so WAFFY and sweet.

You have made a terrible mistake, you know. Now you have to write some more. wink

Ann

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#177992 - 01/05/02 10:13 AM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
Kestrel73 Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 05/27/01
Posts: 1338
Loc: Singapore
Nice, very nicely done. Ann's right...you've got to write more. smile

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#177993 - 01/05/02 10:35 AM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
gerry Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 551
Loc: Canada
You really have captured a moment in time that defines our two heroes.

Nice work. Hope the muse visits you more often.

gerry

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#177994 - 01/05/02 12:31 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
Laurach Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/10/01
Posts: 3874
Loc: NY
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#177995 - 01/05/02 01:05 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
ChiefPam Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/14/01
Posts: 1966
Loc: North Carolina, USA
Nice. Good parallel structure, too. smile

Feel free to come up with more!

PJ
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#177996 - 01/05/02 04:58 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
merry Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 2448
Very nicely done - very waffy.
keep writing
merry

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#177997 - 01/05/02 09:10 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
EmilyH Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 07/10/01
Posts: 903
Loc: Minnesota, USA
This was wonderful. I'd love to read more. smile
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The sower scatters broad his seed, the wheat thou strew'st be souls.

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#177998 - 01/05/02 09:12 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
Nan Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 2652
Loc: The Lone Star State
Very nice indeed. Now, how about another one?

Nan
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#177999 - 01/05/02 09:24 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
Triciaw Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 1453
Loc: Sydney Australia
A wonderful, waffy story! smile smile
I enjoyed it immensely.

I'm looking forward to your next story. wink

Tricia <img src="cool.gif" border="0">

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#178000 - 01/08/02 10:26 PM Re: Comments: One Moment in Time
deans-superchic Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 625
Loc: Tampa Bay, FL, USA
Thank you for all the wonderful comments.

As to me writing anything more.....I have a feeling it'll be at least another 13 years before anything even half way presentable, comes out of this brain again! biggrin

It took me ages and ages to get just that little bit out. I'm amazed at all the wonderful writers out there who are constantly coming up with these wonderful stories and really getting into the minds of the characters. This little outing has made me realize how difficult it is to get the words out of my brain and onto paper (or, in this case, the screen wink ).

Well, enough babbling! Thanks again for being so sweet! For now, I'll leave the writing to the "experts" and just stick to reading! goofy
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