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#180404 - 05/29/02 11:17 PM FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
Bratling Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/01/02
Posts: 1561
Loc: SW Georgia, USA
Well...I did this once before, but since we have been hit with disappearing messages, I decided to start another thread. So...since I just rubbed out Lois, Clark, and their unborn child and allowed their murderer to get away scot free...<dives into a fallout/bomb/tomato proof shelter> You may fire at will...
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#180405 - 05/29/02 11:39 PM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
candy_n_ky Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/07/02
Posts: 44
Loc: kentucky
I actualy got to read your fic, before everything disapeared. You definintly delievered a wham. No, I'm not going to throw tomatoes. I think it's challenging to do something out of the norm, most don't usually write about the death of Lois and Clark, but I think something like this makes you branch out and gets your creative juices flowing. You can come up with all sorts of interesting ideas.

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#180406 - 05/30/02 02:11 AM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
LexxLuthor Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 03/30/02
Posts: 728
Loc: Alt Florida Cluster
I read this thing. DarkFeather. Very, very dark feather.

The good news about this is that FoLCs will come to appreciate Mindy Church and Bill Church Jr. as great SuperVillains.
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#180407 - 05/30/02 03:26 AM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
Bratling Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/01/02
Posts: 1561
Loc: SW Georgia, USA
Ya'll this is totally out of the norm for me...I'm not usually this careless with my toys; I like to leave them in better, not worse, condition than I found them in. I only did this to satisfy the conditions of the challenge. (Can't help it...I'm a sucker for a really good challenge)
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"And we shall exist by amusing ourselves, by dreaming of monstrous loves and fantastic universes, by complaining and quarreling with the pretenses of the world..."
--Arthur Rimbaud, The Flash of Lightning

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#180408 - 05/30/02 04:23 AM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
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Lane and Kent

Registered: 05/13/01
Posts: 153
Loc: Virgina Beach, Virgina
Very very good Laura. You satisfied the requirements of the challenge (though it's not necessary to kill Lois and Clark, although it's that's as dark as they come in fics [Still remember a T&W challenge where Wendy had Clark die of Cancer and Lois commit suicide]). Plus you gave Tank a little something too evil evil

Nice job. Keep up the good work.
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#180409 - 05/30/02 04:45 AM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
Bratling Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/01/02
Posts: 1561
Loc: SW Georgia, USA
Juliet...

Well...I don't usually like to kill my favorite toys, but well...I only had 30 minutes. If you want a somewhat dark fic, try Pyrometric Critique. The first 4 parts should be on the archive... evil The villian will probably be worth a few chuckles...
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"And we shall exist by amusing ourselves, by dreaming of monstrous loves and fantastic universes, by complaining and quarreling with the pretenses of the world..."
--Arthur Rimbaud, The Flash of Lightning

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#180410 - 05/30/02 04:51 AM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
Juliet Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 05/13/01
Posts: 153
Loc: Virgina Beach, Virgina
It's okay Laura. I said either a darkfic or a deathfic and I got one. All I said when I made the original challenge was that I wouldn't MIND L&C surviving but that it wasn't a requirement of the challenge.

The story's very very good. Can't wait for more stories from you.
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#180411 - 05/30/02 10:04 AM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
Tank Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/12/01
Posts: 1404
Loc: Minnesota
Nasty, but it was too easy. wink

Where was the suffering?

Tank (who says a good wham always needs to have those who survive suffer terribly... oh wait, no one survived... never mind)

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#180412 - 05/30/02 12:21 PM Re: FDK--Revenge, Juliet's 30 minute challenge
Bratling Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 04/01/02
Posts: 1561
Loc: SW Georgia, USA
So Tank, you want for me to make them suffer??? That might have to wait...but it can be arranged. evil I mean, I'm busy writing sufferng into Pyro right this minute... evil
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"And we shall exist by amusing ourselves, by dreaming of monstrous loves and fantastic universes, by complaining and quarreling with the pretenses of the world..."
--Arthur Rimbaud, The Flash of Lightning

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