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#253890 - 12/28/17 01:04 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
PMC12 Offline
Lane and Kent

Registered: 02/08/12
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Ouch!! Not only does Uncle Jimmy hate me but Daddy does, too!
This was the Justin Whalen Jimmy, obviously. The Michael Landes Jimmy was interested in Cat. Lois was his buddy. He would never do this. wink

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#253892 - 12/28/17 01:30 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
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Jimmy Landes Olsen- and Jimmy Brooks Olsen- was more mature and experienced. Jimmy Whalen "Make a man out of me, Lois" Olsen has to be the culprit. Absolutely.
Solid writing, though. I was in til the end. I would recommend it for the writing.

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#253893 - 12/28/17 02:51 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
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Lane and Kent

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And, yes, you should always comfort your tormenter before you untie your child in a case like this. Brothers are more important than daughters. GET HER AWAY FROM THE D#''#:"'M KRYPTONITE!!!!!
How could he not do that?!

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#253894 - 12/28/17 05:11 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
BevK Offline
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Yeah, her achy breaky wounded little heart will one day blow up and kill those men. Write it, please! I want to see her as an adult superhero dealing with this. No fair bringing in Dr. Friskin. Nor Dr. Vitamin, as my spell check suggested.

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#253897 - 12/29/17 11:22 AM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
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Forgiving someone, no matter how close a friend, for torturing your kids?? No. Not a chance.
But Paula, the daughter was stoic and put her stiff upper lip into place. That means she was okay with everything. A little agony from kryptonite was nothing. As pointed out, it was done for the love of her mother.
These are supers after all. Torture at the hands of a longtime family friend comes with the status. Since the girl is so much like her mother, and better bait because of that, she'll be over it by next Tuesday. Lois always got over things quickly.
On the other hand, dad can fly. Scooping up his dear friend and flying straight up would have gotten the kryptonite away from the kids and he and Jimmy could have had their heart to heart in a place more conducive to the psycho coming to his senses faster.
Good writing? Absolutely. I was with it to the end, too.
Not letting the psycho face justice is where I part ways.

Kate, hi Bev wave , who hasn't read the feedback because she suspects...........take a guess


Edited by KateW (12/29/17 12:10 PM)
Edit Reason: Clarified an unwelcome remark

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#253898 - 12/29/17 12:02 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
PMC12 Offline
Lane and Kent

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All I know is, it would be like my best friend tying up my kids and playing Russian roulette with them after knocking them out to bind them - and THEN adding me to the rotation when I show up.
No one would walk away scot free after doing that to my kids.
I guess I'm just not superhero material.

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#253899 - 12/29/17 12:15 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
KateW Offline
Clark Defenders United

Registered: 10/10/11
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Welcome to the club. I'm not superhero material either. I wouldn't let anyone do that to my kids no matter who they were. But then, these are fictional, super kids, after all.

Kate, picturing Lois rolling in her fictional grave

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#253900 - 12/29/17 12:25 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
PMC12 Offline
Lane and Kent

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lol I know exactly what that looks like, too! Just like the soil moving above Clark/Superman's grave in BvS!!

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#253903 - 12/29/17 08:02 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
BevK Offline
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Fictional Dead Lois: The Wrath of Mom

When Jimmy got home that night, a picture fell from the wall and smashed on the floor. He no sooner cleaned it up when there was a crash in the small kitchen. The refrigerator door stood open, all the shelves hanging down and the food spilled over the floor. As he stood looking at the mess in bewilderment, a movement in the corner of his eye caught his attention. He turned to look just in time to duck as a butcher knife flew through the air towards his head. He ran from the apartment and hasn't been seen since. (Okay, he hasn't been seen since by the other tenants of his building.)



Edited by BevK (01/11/18 02:39 PM)
Edit Reason: This deserves title.

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#253904 - 12/30/17 12:28 PM Re: WTFAF-- A Different Kind of Aargh!! [Re: BevK]
PMC12 Offline
Lane and Kent

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lol Aha! Fictional Lois gets revenge from the grave!
I think there were reports of an unidentified man running down a street with his head covered as loose pavement and other bits of trash from the gutters were blown into the air and smashed windows as he ran past them. Police think it might have been him. CCTV cameras show a slight man running as fast as he can in a biker jacket and cowboy boots.

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